IS LOVE ENOUGH FOR HAPPY MARRİAGE?
Marriage is a holy stage so people who get marriage should take a lot of things, when they will get married. However, generally love is superior the other things. Many peole argue this state, is love enough for a happy marriage? I think love is not enough because of many reason such as respect, economic problems and different characters are some of them.
First, partners should be respect to each other. When love finished, if they are respect to each other their relationship continoues. As a result of reseach, love's life is 3 years. There is a long-term relationships based on respect so love is not enough.
Secondly, economic problems. People who in love thinks love is solve every problems, but they see realy live in a short time. Because love is not feed the abdominal. Then, they couldn't satisfy their needs and their love is finish in short time.
Some people believe different characters complete to each other. If they have some differences they will not get bored from each other and they enjoy themselves. They may be right some expoint. However, i don't agree with this idea because of many reason. For expamle, one of the wives wants to have fun other one may to stay at home. Love can not cure it. The love slowly killing of different request.We understand here that love is not enough.
In conclusion, argued this subject that many people understand that love is not enough for a happy marriage for reason ı mentioned above.
I think your pragraphes are small you should give example and your concludind pragraph is generall maybe you can write a lot of imformations.
YanıtlaSilI like your topic, it's interesting.
YanıtlaSilhowever,
"people who get married should take a lot of things" what do you mean by this sentence?
your thesis is ok. you have given the predictors in your thesis too.but don't use sentence after such as. you should finish the sentence after you have given the predictors.
ıt should be like that:
" I think love is not enough because of many reason such as respect, economic problems and different characters."
First, partners should have respect to each other.
not "As a result of reseach" but "according to research"
"Secondly, economic problems." you should write sentence! economic problems cause a marriage to get worse day by day.
you should explain how economic problems occur in marriages. for example, husband or wife dont work or wife spends too much etc..
I like your 3rd paragraph. you have given the opposite idea very well. but your refutation is not very strong. so you should try more to explain it.
your conclusion is very short. you should talk about your reasons in your conclusion too.